剑桥PET写作解析

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剑桥PET写作解析

　　导语：备考PET，正常的步骤是先学习剑桥教程，然后再进入冲刺阶段。下面YJBYS小编分享剑桥PET写作解析，欢迎参考!

　　Writing

　　Sample answer of Question 7:

　　I was standing beside someone famous! I was so excited that during a few seconds I couldn't do anything. I was standing and looking at him. He was more taller and more beautiful than he seemed on TV. Suddenly he turned his head and fixed me. I was petrified! He smiled and said hello. I opened my mouth but I couldn't say something. He asked me how I like the show. Finally I answered him. I said it was great. I added that I loved his music and particular his last album. I asked him to sign me an autograph the he shook my hand and went.

　　考官点评

　　这封信写得很成功，语言挥洒自如，词汇丰富，例如：Suddenly he turned his head …. I was petrified.尽管存在一些小错误。

　　分数：5

　　同学们，这道题是必须拿满分的，因为这是PET写作中最容易得分的题型，要注意只几点：

　　1. 书信格式不可少;

　　2. 开头结尾客套话;

　　3. 紧扣3要点，一点一句话;

　　4. 时态要正确;

　　5. 拼写要准确;

　　6. 卷面要整洁。

　　咱们同学平时容易出现这些错误：1. 称呼后面的逗号忘记了;2. 忘记答全了，少答一点;3. 时态有错误;4.常用单词的拼写出错。这些要引以为戒!考前再赶紧写几篇，请老师批改，争取满分啊!!!!

　　Question 8

　　Hi! How are you? Are you all right? I'm fine. Is it very hot in Australia now? Now my country is coming the winter. It is cold everyday. I went to Fragrant Hill last week. It was very cold. But I enjoyed to climb up the mountain After 2 months, I will go to snow mountains because I can play "Snow board". When I was 17 years old I begun to play it. I can play it very well. I have never been in Australia but I saw on TV about Australia. I think Australia is hot whole year! Is this true? Please tell me and I have never played surfing please teach me. I'd like to play surfing! If you could come to China, I can show you all around China. Now China is developing. I want to take you to the mountains because it is very beautiful the mountains. The leaf is changing from green to red or yellow! Can you imagine like New England area? The same! Anyway I enjoy to go all of Japan. Have a good time. I hope you will be happy! Take care! Bye!

　　考官点评

　　这封信内容详细，语气友好。作者语言能力较强，用词贴切。尽管有些错误，但不妨碍理解。

　　分数：4

　　解题要点：

　　1. 不忘涂卡7还是8;

　　2. 句式多变词汇丰富;

　　3. 时态正确信息连贯;

　　4. 问题全答加连词;

　　5. 写完检查卷面整洁。

　　不少同学5月12日就要参加PET考试，张老师再留几篇作文给同学们进行考前热身，提供的样文是张载阳同学编写，张老师批改过的`，供同学们参考。张载阳KET就在张老师班上，KET成绩优秀。他是个爱学习、会学习的优秀学生，课上认真听讲，课后除了完成课堂上布置的作业，另外还练习《学习、练练、考考》，并请我批改练习的作文。孩子的家长非常热心，对孩子的学习非常关心。家长说孩子遇到张老师是幸运的，张老师觉得遇到这么出色的孩子、这么有责任心的家长，张老师也是幸运的：让我们为了同一个目标一起加油!希望张载阳PET仍然能够考优秀!加油!!

　　1. Tim，an English friend of yours, has asked you to go to a concert with him this Saturday, but you cannot go. Write an email to Tim. In your email, you should

　　☆Apologize

　　☆Explain why you cannot go

　　☆Suggest something you can do together the following weekend

　　Dear Tim，

　　I 'm very sorry that I can't go to the concert with you this Saturday. I have to go shopping with my family the whole day. But next Saturday I've got enough time. What about going to see a movie?

　　Yours,

　　David

　　2. Some friends in the USA have just had their first baby and you decide to write to them immediately. Write an email to your friends. In your email, you should

　　☆offer them your congratulations

　　☆ask about their baby

　　☆say what present you are sending them.

　　Dear friends,

　　Congratulations! You've got your first baby. What′s the name of it? It′s boy or girl? I'll send you some toys and clothes as present for them. The best wishes from,

　　David

　　3. You visit an art gallery and buy this postcard.

　　You decided to send the postcard to your friend Chris, who lives in Australia.

　　In your postcard, you should

　　☆say something about the art gallery

　　☆explain you have chosen to send Chris this postcard

　　☆ask Chris about the weather in Australia.

　　Dear Chris,

　　I visited an art gallery and bought this postcard. The gallery was very nice and the picture and sculpture was amazing! I know you like things which are strange, so I have chosen this one. By the way, what′s the weather in Australia? Is it comfortable?Write soon.

　　Yours

　　David

　　4. This is part of a letter you receive from some English friends.

　　For our next holiday, we want to visit your country.

　　Is it best to spend our time in a city or in the countryside?

　　Which would you recommend and why?

　　Dear friend,

　　I 'm very happy that you can come. I think country is good for you. There are mountains near the city. You can have good scenery there, and it's very high. So you can train your body well. There're some games too. We must work with other people, so you can make many new friends! By the way, there're a lot of farms for the public to visit. And you can go there to do some farm work, such as feeding animals, getting milk from a cow, picking the fruits, working in the field....... If you work hard, maybe the owner of the farm will give you some money! Do you think it's good?Hope to see you soon!

　　Yours,

　　David

　　5. Your English teacher has asked you to write a story.

　　Your story must begin with this sentence:

　　The bus was late so I decided to walk.

　　The bus was late so I decided to walk. I must arrive at my grandmother's house 5 miles away at 10'clock. Today was her birthday. And it was 9.30 now. So I ran on the pavement. I thought of taxi but I couldn't find any taxi on the road. There wasn't any subway nearby at all! So I had to run very fast. At that moment, I saw my friend Tom. He was walking towards his car! How lucky I was!I told him what I was trying to do and asked whether he could give me a lift. And he agreed. He drove so fast that I arrived there at 9.45 before the birthday party began!

　　Weather:天气

　　Whether:是否

　　6. This is part of a letter you receive from a friend in the U.S.A.

　　-I guess there are many traditional festivals in your country. What′s the most meaningful one? What do people celebrate this festival? Write and tell me all about it!

　　.Now write a letter, answering your friend's questions.

　　.Write your letter in about 100 words on your answer sheet.

　　Dear friend,

　　I'm very happy to receive your letter. You're right, there are many traditional festivals in my country. And in my opinion, the Spring Festival is the most meaningful one, because it is the first day of the lunar New Year. And in the morning of that day people will buy fireworks, and stick paper cut on the window. They'll clean the room, and make dumplings. People who work far away usually try to get home to have a family reunion. In the evening, family members gather together to have a big meal and eat dumplings while watching Spring Festival Gala. And they'll also set off fireworks and firecrackers. Do you think it's amazing? What's the most meaningful traditional festival in your country?

　　Yours,

　　David

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