雅思写作5.5的原因

时间:2020-10-14 17:40:22 雅思(IELTS) 我要投稿

雅思写作5.5的原因

  英语写作为什么突破不了5.5?可能是下面的原因造成的,下面是小编整理的一些一用就可能会5.5的句子,大家一定要慎重!

雅思写作5.5的原因

  1.Every coin has two sides (任何事情都有两面性)

  这个短语我相信是个土生土长的中国学生都用过吧。雅思写作又是以议论文为主,所以此短语就更能派上用场了。有的同学会问:这个短语我从初中用到研究生毕业,有什么错吗?我考四级也用它、六级也用它,考研也用它?为什么现在才告诉我不能用了?

  这个谚语在雅思写作中"was very much overused"。雅思写作考官一起打分的时候会"mock this expression (proverb) and say to our colleagues, 'I've found another one!' and laugh."

  考官的心情:it was rather annoying, boring and disappointing to read such unoriginal language。

  We prefer to read something new and interesting rather than read language that has been used many times before.

  2.Last but not least(最后但并非最不重要的`一点)

  大家看到这个短语很惊讶是吗?我们的老师不是反复告诉我们,写作文要有层次感,要有连接词。比如:Firstly, secondly, last but not the least!吗?

  真实情况是这样的:"Last but not least"这个短语通常用在口语中,所以是informal的表达。而且这个短语的意思是在介绍三个人或物时,说到最后一个时这么用。

  考官是这么举例的: 比如你在介绍部门成员的时候,你这么说 "First, this is Mr. Wang. He's our new assistant accountant. Then we have Miss Li, who is a new receptionist , ........and, last but not least, we have Mr. Lin, who is our new website manager."(你把人家放到最后介绍了,但是要说明不是因为不重要就放到最后介绍。避免别人不高兴。)

  如果你确实想不到其他词或短语了,就直接用"Last" or "Lastly"

  3."With the development of science and technology, ...".(随着科技的发展)

  考官说:这个是典型的Chinglish,他问:你们写作文都这样开头吗?我无言以对。

  这么写不对吗?

  人家原话是这么说的 “ This phrase is not wrong or bad English and there are topics where it is suitable to use. But it just became overused and misused.”

  考官,举个例子好吗?什么情况下是misused?

  “Do you think students have too much homework?" and the first sentence the essay was, "With the development of science and technology, ...". Boring.

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